Goodbye

I remember when i saw you with her,
You look terribly happy, no wonder
it's like the happiness i felt,
when you and me were together.

You brighten up my days,
Yet, you also darken my nights.
You make me laugh out loud,
Yet you pull my tears down my eyes.

Things have change,
and so are we.
Yesterday is part of the past,
and we could never get it back.

The laughter and tears will remain,
and will miss more of them,
I wish someday somehow,
you would still remember my name.

Time to pick up my self
and start a brand new life
We both have our own life now,
but you'll remain here in my heart.


Goodbye my almost lover,
Goodbye my hopeless dream.


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My unfinnised poem which i completed just a while ago (teka, alangan ako sa ingles ko,tama ba grammar ko?) Nakita ko kanina sa isa sa mga folder sa laptop ko, 4 paragraphs pa lang sya nun, bitin yung laman ng tula kaya dinagdagan ko ulet. Then post na :)

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10 comments:

Jag said...

ganun tlga have to move on na...nice poem!

tiowelaytiesrosales said...

ang sarap basahin ng paulit ulit.

definella said...

@jag
ayt! tnx for droppin jag :)

@trosales
bakit? nakakarelate ka noh? yududuy :p thanks.

MiDniGHt DriVer said...

yap.. tamang tama! (parang magaling ako magenglish..lolz)

btw, tama si jag, have to move on. kawalan ka nya! :-)

definella said...

@Mdriver
haha sampol nmn ng english jan^^ hehe sana nga..

MiDniGHt DriVer said...

hey.. you know! vitwater! lolz

tiowelaytiesrosales said...

Sobrang nakarelate madam :D

nafacamot said...

awwness... pero tama sila kaya nga naimbento ang salitang "goodbye" at "move on" eh. Ajah...

Traveliztera said...

awww...

hey, the poem's really nice :) dama ko emotions mo rito :)

ok ka naman na?

definella said...

@Mdriver
lol vitwater =))

@Trosales
aww.. apir! :)

@Nafacamot
tama! aja aja!! ^^

@travelizta
tnx :p
ok na ok na ko.. last year pa yun, ngayon ko lang napost^^

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